Wednesday, February 01, 2006

bleak

bleak is the will
bleak the black sky
bleak the brown earth
bleak the night
bleak the day
and its daily rebirth
bleak is the silence
bleak the silent wind
which carries this silence
bleak the dead
bleak the living
bleak is this running sorrow
bleak is today
bleak is tomorrow
bleak is you
bleak is me
bleak are the colours
bleak the seasons
bleak is the yellow evening
bleak the red morning
bleak is the brown earth
and the dark matter of the black sky

17 comments:

Anonymous said...

Oh God!!
what happen to u Maddy.... this is what u call work?? how can u write such desolate poem....
NO!!!
Every one is so happy!!
Uplifting is the time!!
Beautiful looks the night with the stars!!
Sunny is the day!!
Gentle is the silent wind which cuts the cold!!
Bright is life!!
Encouraging is today!!
Hopeful is tomorrow!!
Decorated is the colours!!
Furnished is the season!!
Optimistic is me!!
So should you be!!
Joyfull is everyyyyything!!

Black is all orange, green, pink, red, white, yellow, silver, golden..........

madhavan said...

Bleak is your comment
Bleak is my response

madhavan said...

Bleak is your comment
Bleak is my response

J said...

Bleak is your post
Bleak is my comment

madhavan said...

J:

Bleak is your bleak comment
Bleak is my bleak response

Neetika:

Dont repeat things. Dont repeat things

Anonymous said...

y cant i?? y cant i??

oh just shut up!!!
Bleak is your head!!!
Dim is your thoughts!!
and so hopeless is u!!
U nonsense!!!

madhavan said...

bleak is your identity

Anonymous said...

shut up. that is not neetika maddy. she is someone posting in my name. oh god. what to do. maddy, UNCLE, BUD-DA, tell her to go

Anonymous said...

oh neetika.... i knew that u wuld make dat out.....
please accept my appologies....all this weird stuff was coming from me.....i am really really sorry!!!!
i know i have lost it....my mind, my thoughts are becoming dim as i am growing older....sorry cant help it....
MAIN BUDDHA HO RAHA HOON..........
iam loosing on my eyesight....my hairs....my energy....my brain....
*crying*

Anonymous said...

dont cry. eat brinjal fry

Anonymous said...

oh this is my pet name....n i am neetika's pet...bhaow...bhaow...

only she can call me maddy or doggy..... bhaow...bhaow!!!!

madhavan said...

it's spelt M A D H A V A N with an A in between.

And the person who makes all these barking sounds is NEETIKA who is fantasising about me as her pet dog. Neetu baby, do we really want to get into that territory.

Anonymous said...

oh shut up!!
who is talking bout M A D H A V A N with A in between....
She was talking bout madhvan n dats me...
ok dont mess with me...

madhavan said...

er, who's this everyone who knows i am culpable for all this nonsense. name five of this everyone...

madhavan said...

Whoa my doll, wot r u rambling. dis is d internet. Y dont u flash dis in GDS

madhavan said...

Whoa my doll, wot r u rambling. dis is d internet. Y dont u flash dis in GDS

Vj said...

Bleak bleak..somebody needs a tweak