when the clock strikes ten ten and i fall
into the marble of the gilded banquet hall
that is when i hear the ceiling call
through a hole in the magician's shawl
some of whose rabbits now jump at me
as i try to wrench myself free
from the floor's all embracing glee
i try hard to stand but i crawl
there is now whisky burning on the stove
fat men in white wings are flying above
one of whom has arrows and a bow
he shoots one and it becomes a shove
which takes me down by the chest
i descend thinking this is no time to rest
soon there is going to be another ball
the clock strikes ten ten then and i fall
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Aah, no wonder. That's why my clock never strikes ten ten. Have you jinxed it by any chance?
My magic is far reaching n does not even spare time. In fact thanks to me no clock strikes at ten ten
Alrite magic madhavankutty pillai. Do me a favour in return for all the good deeds I've done for you... make my latest crush fall for me.
you are a mutated version of alice in wonderland. God i can't stand that girl!!!
J J J J Hai: One spell comin up and since this is potent stuff, you will start seeing the difference immediately. Expect some surprises in a day or two. But be warned when it comes to luv shuv, my magic does what it does but later, god help you
rrrrrRavali: I am not a MUTATED version of Alice in Wonderland. I am a PERVERTED version of Alice in Wonderland
be more specific will ya?
in 1 day or 2 days?
does the wait start from when i last commented or when u replied?
1 surprise or 2 surprises?
will he fall or not?
will god help me or not?
J:
two days; since i replied; 87 surprises; he will fall; god will not help you, madhavankutty pillai will
neetika:
again!!! nice words have happened. again!!!! no nice words allowed here. no 'pretty good', no 'very nice', no 'good attempt', no 'i like it', no 'you have style', no 'keep writing', no goody goody praise accepted. all BANNED. only smart nonsense comments allowed
I dont give jack shit about anyone's thinking. Especially completely trite mushy banter. And no using incredibly unimaginative words like stupid here. BANNED. Be creative.
Ok so lemme just have this in writing so that we are on the same page:
9.03 AM on Saturday, 21st of Jan, 2006, 87 surprises. OK?
Hmm... cool. Now temme:
Why 87? Why O Why O WHy did you choose that number of all intinite numbers in the world?
Magical Mathematical deductions I suppose?
How do I know if he's fallen?
What do I do if I don't get a single surprise?
Why are you doing all this for me?
Nope, you aint got it right. All 87 surprises dont happen in two days. The surprises begin in two days and then they run on till there's 87 of them and then either you break up or one of you die.
You will know he's fallen if you go and ask him out for something, like a circus. Alternatively you can wait for a surprise.
If you dont get a single surprise by said date, then you will know that I was faffing.
I am doing all this for you because you have done much for me as you say but I sure as hell dont know what they are but I guess I will take your word for it.
Is everything revealed? Are we on the same page now?
Hah......ten ten.....
Tumhare Bara baj gaye hain....
MADHAVANKUTTY PILLAI!!!!!!!!!!
Aapne SOLAH AANA sahi kaha.
Everything is not revealed ;)
But we are on the same page, technically.
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